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Holding Up
by Clara Mae Gregorythe sunbeams weave through
the nestled trestle of limbs
holding up the sky
01/17/2009
Author's Note: reposted haiku
Posted on 11/13/2009
Copyright © 2025 Clara Mae Gregory
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/13/09 at 05:08 PM Ah, I lay on the grass enjoying the light of your haiku filtered through a joyful soul. Ahhhhhh.... mmmmmmm... thanks |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 11/13/09 at 05:38 PM ... nice, very nice..... |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 11/14/09 at 01:30 AM Very nice! |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 11/15/09 at 12:42 AM This imagery is quite vivid, and I like the two directions of movement: sunbeams coming down, branches reaching up. Nice! |
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