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BLOODlust

by Terry Olynik

In
The back seat
Of
Your daddy's car.





Your
Scream
Was
Just
As
I
Imagined.

11/01/2009

Posted on 11/01/2009
Copyright © 2025 Terry Olynik

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 11/01/09 at 04:03 PM

... brilliant!!!

Posted by A. Paige White on 11/01/09 at 04:25 PM

Been watching some Halloween movies? You captured the essence beautifully!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/02/09 at 01:19 AM

Eeeeeeek! and (blush..)

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 11/02/09 at 09:42 AM

I can hear Vincent Price howling with mad laughter...HAA...HAHAHAHA...HAAAAAAAAAAAAA! Brilliant!

Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 11/03/09 at 04:05 AM

Delicious!

Posted by Rowan Luis on 09/01/10 at 11:37 AM

wow. I love this. It reminds me of a song. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ujiDkiniNvo&feature=related

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