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Crimson Sky

by Jose Feliciano

Shattered faces,
All unresolved.
Mysteries of darkness,
Memories that are dissolved.

Scars of anger,
With tears of blood.
You're still a stranger,
Bleeding me to a flood.

Obscure redemption,
Intentions not known.
I'm scared to fight,
Falling and all alone.

I long for eternity,
To be embraced with peace.
Seeking empty desires,
To quench my thirst and sleep.

Soulless in a desert,
Like evil hunting a prey.
What have I become?
Is it worth the price to pay?

Pure skies are shattered,
Demons torment and fly.
Like a crow in the night,
I fly into the crimson Sky.

10/29/2009

Author's Note: I thought it would be nice to actually write a poem for Halloween. The poem originally started out with personal feelings of recent events, but I thought it would be interesting to disguise those feelings with a Halloween metaphor. Please excuse the writing, English is not my first language. Feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Posted on 10/30/2009
Copyright © 2024 Jose Feliciano

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 10/30/09 at 01:34 AM

... excellent....

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