|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 10/26/09 at 04:13 PM|
Most tantalizing. This is like written growing incarnations of things we do not always take note of. You are an unusual and keen-minded author. Your mind is on subliminal, and takes a reader along. "We have seasons."totally rocks!
|Posted by Stephan Anstey on 11/23/10 at 03:53 PM|
Well, first, wow. Second. Holy cow. Third... Geez Laweez. No wonder they published it - how could they not.
|Posted by Stephan Anstey on 11/23/10 at 03:54 PM|
Can I just say this is breathtaking?
|Posted by Steve Michaels on 11/23/10 at 09:33 PM|
Takes my breath away. Congrats on POTD!
|Posted by Linda Fuller on 11/24/10 at 12:16 AM|
I had read this before in a visit to your library and am glad to see it as POTD - congrats!
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/24/10 at 01:41 AM|
Great to see this as POTD!
|Posted by Paul Lastovica on 11/24/10 at 03:07 AM|
maybe one day I'll make sense of it ... maybe i should print a copy to keep bedside for when i wake up on the other side of reality.
|Posted by Jasmine Sword-Mann on 11/24/10 at 08:07 AM|
This is poetry. This is what poetry should be. I bow to you, sir. You are beautiful.
|Posted by Laurie Blum on 11/24/10 at 07:27 PM|
This is just perfectly written, each section so thoughtful and intricate. As a whole it is like a Thanksgiving feast; so much to take in and all of it excellent. I just keep going back for seconds!:)
|Posted by Paganini Jones on 11/25/10 at 09:56 PM|
Excellent, excellent, excellent. And congratulations. I'm proud to be associated with you :)
|Posted by Laura Doom on 11/28/10 at 11:01 AM|
As a receptacle for choral collection, this overflows, unwilling to contain contamination :>
|Posted by Jody Pratt on 11/30/10 at 01:49 AM|
Unique and inspiring. Reading this piece was one of the first things I did when I came to this site. It was enough to make me want to join. :)
|Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 04/20/15 at 08:38 PM|
Never saw this one before. So good.
|Posted by George Hoerner on 04/22/15 at 04:54 PM|
I don't know how I missed this one. It is great!