Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 10/26/09 at 04:13 PM Most tantalizing. This is like written growing incarnations of things we do not always take note of. You are an unusual and keen-minded author. Your mind is on subliminal, and takes a reader along. "We have seasons."totally rocks! |
Posted by Stephan Anstey on 11/23/10 at 03:53 PM Well, first, wow. Second. Holy cow. Third... Geez Laweez. No wonder they published it - how could they not. |
Posted by Stephan Anstey on 11/23/10 at 03:54 PM Can I just say this is breathtaking? |
Posted by Steve Michaels on 11/23/10 at 09:33 PM Takes my breath away. Congrats on POTD! |
Posted by Linda Fuller on 11/24/10 at 12:16 AM I had read this before in a visit to your library and am glad to see it as POTD - congrats! |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/24/10 at 01:41 AM Great to see this as POTD! |
Posted by Paul Lastovica on 11/24/10 at 03:07 AM maybe one day I'll make sense of it ... maybe i should print a copy to keep bedside for when i wake up on the other side of reality. |
Posted by Jasmine Sword-Mann on 11/24/10 at 08:07 AM This is poetry. This is what poetry should be. I bow to you, sir. You are beautiful. |
Posted by Laurie Blum on 11/24/10 at 07:27 PM This is just perfectly written, each section so thoughtful and intricate. As a whole it is like a Thanksgiving feast; so much to take in and all of it excellent. I just keep going back for seconds!:) |
Posted by Paganini Jones on 11/25/10 at 09:56 PM Excellent, excellent, excellent. And congratulations. I'm proud to be associated with you :) |
Posted by Laura Doom on 11/28/10 at 11:01 AM As a receptacle for choral collection, this overflows, unwilling to contain contamination :> |
Posted by Jody Pratt on 11/30/10 at 01:49 AM Unique and inspiring. Reading this piece was one of the first things I did when I came to this site. It was enough to make me want to join. :) |
Posted by Nadia Gilbert Kent on 04/20/15 at 08:38 PM Never saw this one before. So good. |
Posted by George Hoerner on 04/22/15 at 04:54 PM I don't know how I missed this one. It is great! |