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Rust from the rain. (Her library card said 15)

by Johnny Crimson

A short Virginian dame
head hiked up to heights unimaginable.

Chuck the New Orleans pretension
and gather your unmentionables in your teeth dear.

Peddle up to me
with that smirking sneaking
confidence and the lack thereof

Please drool generously on the concrete
my sweet.

And we'll dab in fuck
and smudge and suck
the dampness off the cloth
and huff ethers older cousin till we see god.

And never again we came
to the place where
teeth are stained
with aged rust from the rain.


10/19/2009

Author's Note: Aged new. Bicycle new. Fresh paint on my old bumper.

Posted on 10/19/2009
Copyright © 2025 Johnny Crimson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Julie Adams on 10/19/09 at 02:47 PM

loved every image and action loaded herein, fab read...a fav for me, peace, jewels

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/19/09 at 06:46 PM

That last stanza rocks.

Posted by Stephan Anstey on 10/20/09 at 08:34 PM

S4 i like a lot.

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