Baby and Gramps (tanka)

by Jim Benz

hand in mouth
she suckles her palm
and looks perplexed
at an old man
who has no tits


Author's Note: I know I can do better than this (but it made me chuckle)

Posted on 10/04/2009
Copyright © 2020 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 10/05/09 at 12:16 AM

well....it made me chuckle, too!

Posted by A. Paige White on 10/06/09 at 01:54 AM

*giggle* just the first of many perplexed looks she will send your direction I'd wager. Too cute.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/27/09 at 06:37 PM

Yes, yes, man learning his limitations. Ha! Sorry, Grandpa, I couldn't help it. Enjoy this precious child.

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