| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 10/04/09 at 12:39 PM I find this to be beautifully stunning, Jim. I am definately saving this one! Loved it! |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 10/09/09 at 07:16 AM Beautifully subtle, the speaking, and the interruption. Love the delicacy of this, in a form (tanka) I have come to love. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 10/09/09 at 01:33 PM This is so lovely... I know this moment. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/10/09 at 01:01 AM Such a fine touch to this. Thank you. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 10/11/09 at 05:51 PM This brought me sighs of longing. I keep stepping out hoping for just such song and find only sighs among the boughs. Lovely. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 10/12/09 at 06:05 AM You wrote a Tanka in its true meaning! Very well done as I love the art form of the Ku and Tanka! |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 10/12/09 at 10:07 PM seasonal longing with each word, line and sigh. smh |
| Posted by William Brunk on 10/13/09 at 11:06 PM gorgeous imagery. great write |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 10/19/09 at 03:34 PM beautiful seasonal piece...so much said and left unsaid, well done, peace, jewels |
