|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 10/04/09 at 12:39 PM|
I find this to be beautifully stunning, Jim. I am definately saving this one! Loved it!
|Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 10/09/09 at 07:16 AM|
Beautifully subtle, the speaking, and the interruption. Love the delicacy of this, in a form (tanka) I have come to love.
|Posted by Laurie Blum on 10/09/09 at 01:33 PM|
This is so lovely... I know this moment.
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/10/09 at 01:01 AM|
Such a fine touch to this. Thank you.
|Posted by A. Paige White on 10/11/09 at 05:51 PM|
This brought me sighs of longing. I keep stepping out hoping for just such song and find only sighs among the boughs. Lovely.
|Posted by Tony Whitaker on 10/12/09 at 06:05 AM|
You wrote a Tanka in its true meaning! Very well done as I love the art form of the Ku and Tanka!
|Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 10/12/09 at 10:07 PM|
seasonal longing with each word, line and sigh. smh
|Posted by William Brunk on 10/13/09 at 11:06 PM|
gorgeous imagery. great write
|Posted by Julie Adams on 10/19/09 at 03:34 PM|
beautiful seasonal piece...so much said and left unsaid, well done, peace, jewels