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The Actress

by Robbi Skaera

Bury your face in your hands, act upset, and it hurts less
In the waiting room, you'll listen if a blind man says
"You should not look into the sun"; you would not look.

But the window's open, you can almost see the moon.
Heed his words, and mourn the thing he lost that no-one took.
You should not look into the sun. You should not look.

Bury yourself in your books, act empowered, play the part.
All the world's a stage, but the play poorly cast.
You should not look into the sun, you should not look.

Point your talent inward; be your own biggest fan.
The audience lip-synch to your monologue.
You should not look into the sun. You should not look.

09/28/2009

Author's Note: Obvious Oscar Wilde quote S3L2. Much more effective with the music I wrote. Retitled, following apocalypse.

Posted on 09/28/2009
Copyright © 2024 Robbi Skaera

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/03/09 at 11:22 AM

I say the words are just fine and they should weld perfectly well to the music you had in mind.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 10/03/09 at 12:33 PM

Aye, Robbi, excellent poem + excellent with music.

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 10/03/09 at 03:31 PM

Nice write Robbi Put the music in your Journal mate and let us know in that it's there in the Gen Forum. Dan and I are not averse to leaving the odd song in our Journals.

Posted by Sarah Wolf on 10/05/09 at 01:26 PM

Nice...

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