| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/23/09 at 01:34 PM ...ali, love this. and what you did with the concept of "I" ness... |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/23/09 at 06:32 PM Whoa!! That word "delicately" sets this apart for me - I can almost see you do a little tip toe dance away from this discovery. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 09/23/09 at 06:41 PM Perfectly expressed. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 09/24/09 at 02:53 PM This is delicately filled with a life-enhancing truth, and suddenly - I can breathe! |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 09/27/09 at 06:25 AM Capturing the true spirit of the Haiku Alison! |
