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Wandering Wondering
by Kerowyn Rose
Those finger tips,
Soft finger tips...
Oh! The places they can touch!
Those hands,
Sure hands...
Oh! The places they can clutch!
Those lips,
Gentle lips...
Oh! The places they can brush!
That tongue...
Oh that tongue,
and the words it can hush!
09/22/2009 Posted on 09/23/2009
Copyright © 2024 Kerowyn Rose
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/23/09 at 02:15 AM ...ker0wyn,Rose?, this is one tall pome m'lady...so much to like about this: three thoses, one that...WHAT A KILLER COMBO...each dah ta dah, ta dah! steps more into the realm of humanness--living life and the bow tie is that reference to the tongue and the hushing...a world is said by that statement...you ought to be proud of that line...wow! i'm still in awe at the sweep of this. |
| Posted by Shannon McEwen on 09/23/09 at 03:20 AM very sensual, made me feel warm all over, I LOVED this, at first glance, simple lines, but the reactions they can evoke, wow! |
| Posted by James Zealy on 09/23/09 at 06:05 PM The power of a piece like this is the multiple paths it can take you depending on your interpretation of the words. Meaning what is said without saying it. When a piece is writtten this way it entices our imagination to fill in the gaps in all sorts of amazing ways. I really enjoyed this. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/23/09 at 06:19 PM Both senuous and sensual! |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 09/24/09 at 06:55 PM I love it when you go "tactillian"....nice write. Thanks. |
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