My Smile "I" Give To You (Senryu) by Tony WhitakerOne Dimensional
Flat, Awkward, Lifeless, Needs Work
My poem "The 'I'" 09/21/2009
Author's Note: I found it funny as I looked at my library today, which I hardly ever do, but a little bird told me and so, Eureka, my smile "I" give to you!
Posted on 09/21/2009 Copyright © 2024 Tony Whitaker
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Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/22/09 at 01:05 AM Well, my real comment is on your other poem. But let me say what a guy you are! Smiling at this superficial reading of the original. You got my blood-a-rushin with this one, my friend. |
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