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My Smile "I" Give To You (Senryu)

by Tony Whitaker

One Dimensional

Flat, Awkward, Lifeless, Needs Work

My poem "The 'I'"

09/21/2009

Author's Note: I found it funny as I looked at my library today, which I hardly ever do, but a little bird told me and so, Eureka, my smile "I" give to you!

Posted on 09/21/2009
Copyright © 2024 Tony Whitaker

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/22/09 at 01:05 AM

Well, my real comment is on your other poem. But let me say what a guy you are! Smiling at this superficial reading of the original. You got my blood-a-rushin with this one, my friend.

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