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Responsibility is overrated
by Shannon McEwenOn this rather dull day
I wish I might, I wish I may
Sleep a dreamless sleep today
Wash away this shade of grey
To somewhere far, far away
Keep all deep thoughts at bay
Leave old issues where they lay
Fiery kisses and my wicked way
Let’s just take this day to play
Let our hips and lips display
Limbs and clothes in disarray
Love me like an old cliché
Take away this cold dismay
Looking out at this dull day
09/14/2009 Posted on 09/14/2009
Copyright © 2026 Shannon McEwen
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/14/09 at 09:30 PM ...shannon, you have a new admirer...a lovely lilt-ish "cute" but a yearning day...for real...the rhyme works... |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 09/15/09 at 12:40 AM ... wonderful..... |
| Posted by Elle O'Connor on 09/22/09 at 01:01 PM "lilt-ish" is a perfect word choice from Charlie!
Very well done Shannon. It evokes many different feelings and thoughts in me. I very much like when a poem can do that! Welcome to Pathetic. |
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