I made myself a wishing pole and cast with all my might up into the heavens upon a starry night I baited it with faith and hope then gazed up at the moon waiting for a nibble surely I’d catch one soon I cranked the reel, took up the slack and cast it out again talked with God and Jesus and then I said amen I felt my pole begin to bend I saw it snap in two from too many wishes not every wish comes true I made another wishing pole I’ve learned from my mistake if you really want it your dream is yours to make
09/11/2009
Posted on 09/11/2009Copyright © 2026 Jennifer Ragan
It's so good to read your poetry again! I like this, like the concept, the message and the moral of the story. One thing I would suggest for S1, L2, I would add "it" after cast. Either way, I like it and it made my day to read your stuff again!
I agree with Shannon, it might not be the finished article yet but it is a classic "Jennifer Ragan" in the making :)