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Homemade Security System

by Shannon McEwen

Unfamiliar minivan
Parks across the lane
Strangers pile out
Doors slamming

An eager wag
Big black tail
And smaller diapered
Bum wiggle

Dog and toddler
Side by side
At the screen door
Keenly barking

09/10/2009

Posted on 09/11/2009
Copyright © 2024 Shannon McEwen

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 09/11/09 at 08:43 PM

Nice! Welcome to pathetic!!!

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 09/12/09 at 04:31 PM

A grand perception and a keen wit you have! I was here taking it all serious... wait!...it IS serious!

w e l c o m e * w i t h * s h i n i n g * e y e s !

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/14/09 at 09:36 PM

...man, uhlady, i see megrandson Kai and my dog Odie or his dog Maddie...this is warm...wanna hug 'em both...a nice slice of life.

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