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half-eaten ku

by Jim Benz

apple harvest --
stretching from branch to branch
those fucking squirrels

08/28/2009

Posted on 08/28/2009
Copyright © 2024 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jason Wardell on 08/28/09 at 09:58 PM

Absolutely hilarious with a personal emotion to it that's remarkably difficult to express in haiku form. I love it.

Posted by Laura Doom on 08/28/09 at 10:13 PM

Surely this is missing a last line?

I suggest:

should have their nuts confiscated

Squirrels have a hard enough time as it is, without being subject to assualt by sciurophiles.

Posted by Laura Doom on 08/28/09 at 10:15 PM

...and suffering the sympathies of dyslexics...

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/31/09 at 03:45 AM

hahahahahaha - to you and Ms. Doom. I'm so glad we don't have squirrels in our yard - the varmints!

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