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Awakening Her Senses

by Wendy Sparling

Her senses scatter out of control
through time, doubting her
self worth and well being.
She is not here...nor there.
She is a shattered fragment.

She hides her inner turmoil
with quick laughter and smiles,
but her well-being is on hold.
She is an empty shell.
She is not.

Exploring her emotions, she lightly
brushed her finger over cool skin
and lingered above her cheek bone.
She is here.for the moment.
She is sensing touch.

Opening her eyes, she is
astounded by the brilliant
colors that paint her landscape.
She is here...for the moment.
Absorbing sight.

Light tapping on the roof drew her
outside to listen to splattering of
rain drops dancing on the roof top.
She is here...for the moment.
She is hearing.

Inhaling the fresh damp air, she
is reminded of sweet jasmine
and flowers in full bloom.
She is here.for the moment.
She is smelling.

Lifting her face to the open sky,
she opens her mouth to smile,
and drops of rain tease her tongue.
She is here...for the moment.
She is tasting.

As she gathered these moments,
she realizes she is touching, seeing
listening, smelling and tasting.
She has awakened her senses.
She is BEING.



08/02/2009

Author's Note: Author and Artist Wendy Sparling. Thank you, Quentin.

Posted on 08/02/2009
Copyright © 2024 Wendy Sparling

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/02/09 at 11:24 PM

..... outstanding!!!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/03/09 at 01:03 AM

Each stanza nicely complements the title Wendy, and I like how the final one rounds the whole thing off with the word BEING. Excellent painting also; as a life long birder I often see myself in that light...with all six senses.

Posted by A. Paige White on 08/03/09 at 01:39 AM

Stunning painting with the poem a bloom opening slowly beautifully contrasting the speed in the humming bird. Totally exquisite. I adore hibiscus almost to the cellular.

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 08/03/09 at 04:02 AM

One can live without food or oxygen for minutes or days but not without impressions which our sense instruments keep on registering. And here, in this beautiful depiction of yours, 'She' awakens,transcending the mere functional bounds of these instruments, ataining depths which is pure sensing, attained by Becoming.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/03/09 at 04:15 AM

Fine painting, fine poem Wen...CharMin

Posted by George Hoerner on 08/03/09 at 12:57 PM

It must be hummingbird season!! Great write and great painting!!

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 08/04/09 at 01:00 PM

I love the way you combine your visual art with your expressive words-both a just awesome.The painting is especially beautiful.

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