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BEAUTY MARK

by Terry Olynik

You always speak
Of the afterworld.
Your Catholic fear.
So afraid we'll be
In different dimensions.
Worlds apart.

Fear not my love.
Your blush and your beauty mark
Will lead me to you.
As I take your hand,
You will surely
Recognize my smile.

08/02/2009

Posted on 08/02/2009
Copyright © 2024 Terry Olynik

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Allison Smith on 08/02/09 at 06:02 AM

Simple yet so effective. What a beautiful piece.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 08/02/09 at 11:45 AM

So sweet!

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 08/02/09 at 12:25 PM

This is indeed a soothingly sweet romantic read. I like the simplicity of the lines and especially how you end with the last 3 lines-I love that.

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 08/02/09 at 03:00 PM

Well... Speachless!

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 08/03/09 at 12:44 AM

simple and amazing! thank you for sharing this!

Posted by James Zealy on 08/06/09 at 09:38 AM

A love like this knows no dimension. Simple and effective

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/06/09 at 08:05 PM

Now this is faith. Thank you.

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