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Demon's Corral

by Clara Mae Gregory


A sprite deleted the loving letters

and somehow, deleted your poems.

It put up some ugly spiteful fences

to keep me here at home.

The sprite was right-

The setting was wrong

when along came the night

where Love didn't belong.

Left are only ghostly letters

and files of phantom poems.

You will always mend

your spiteful fences

so I can never again roam

unbroken into the night

under the future's flight

above the past now gone.

07/21/2009

Posted on 07/21/2009
Copyright © 2024 Clara Mae Gregory

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by A. Paige White on 07/21/09 at 04:10 PM

I have to say, your poem truly lives up to the title, which is a great lead in! Beatifully done.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/21/09 at 07:43 PM

I thought it very clever the way you mixed the rhymed words sprite and spite - and alerted us to the light and the darkness in our lives and in ourselves. Great write!

Posted by Christel Crews on 07/23/09 at 02:09 AM

this has great imagery and the use of word play makes it fun to read, but i hope all is well

Posted by Mike Loftis on 07/23/09 at 02:26 PM

I found this to be very sad but very well done. I love visiting your library.

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