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Water Lilly haiku

by A. Paige White

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sunshine
sets the water aflame
in puddles


07/19/2009

Author's Note:







Posted on 07/19/2009
Copyright © 2022 A. Paige White

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 07/19/09 at 05:19 PM

dazzling beautiful- this is tickling my senses delightful thanks for sharing, Paige :)

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 07/19/09 at 10:18 PM

...the flower is second, in beauty, to your words annnnd the flower is gorgeous.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/26/12 at 03:06 PM

The word "aflame" - a great choice. I do love the variegated leaves also - wild!

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