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The Hollow Of Your Presence by Melissa PantherYou never cease
you love beyond love
I cannot function
in this space
you have left
I cannot exist
in the hollow of
your presence
The distance, its shadow,
the state lines crossed
are merely
attempts at confirming
what never needed
confirmation
What never required
clarity
what never searched,
journeyed
what never fell away
or apart
And yet you stand
and here I am helpless to
turn away
And yet you never cease
and in that I
never cease
07/05/2009 Posted on 07/07/2009 Copyright © 2025 Melissa Panther
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/07/09 at 08:32 PM There is an echo quality to the words of this and what you're saying. I see a wispy presence, constant. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 07/10/09 at 04:17 PM This angst style poem is obviously directed at lost love, sacrifice and surrender. Let hope it’s not autobiographical. Either way it’s a very emotive piece. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 09/03/13 at 12:56 PM a truly wonderful piece of writing. and congrats on POTD. |
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