(You) Make Me

by Alison McKenzie

You make me
I feel your energy bounce
Over the net
Like a pong
And I, your ping
And together, we
Are the match.
(Game. Set. Match.)


Author's Note: For Vince, and the other poets that make me laugh...

Posted on 07/07/2009
Copyright © 2018 Alison McKenzie

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by V. Blake on 07/07/09 at 07:47 AM

Hahaha I am honored to have inspired you!

Posted by Laurie Blum on 07/07/09 at 01:02 PM

Cute and fun! Great vibes think alike!! :D

Posted by Shonda Creemer on 07/08/09 at 06:13 AM

Bloody brilliant!!! ;)

Posted by Wayne Tate on 07/08/09 at 01:15 PM

Clever as always Allison :)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/09/09 at 09:33 PM

Nicely put Alison. I really like the ping pong anaology; applies nicely to the topic.

Posted by Kris Mara on 07/10/09 at 08:39 PM

a lovely tribute...excellent analogy here...

Return to the Previous Page

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 1 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2018 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)