(You) Make Me
by Alison McKenzie
You make me
I feel your energy bounce
Over the net
Like a pong
And I, your ping
And together, we
Are the match.
(Game. Set. Match.)
Author's Note: For Vince, and the other poets that make me laugh...
Posted on 07/07/2009
Copyright © 2016 Alison McKenzie
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by V. Blake on 07/07/09 at 03:47 AM|
Hahaha I am honored to have inspired you!
|Posted by Laurie Blum on 07/07/09 at 09:02 AM|
Cute and fun! Great vibes think alike!! :D
|Posted by El McCandless on 07/07/09 at 01:43 PM|
Darling, and yes, fun! Lots of fun.
|Posted by Shonda Creemer on 07/08/09 at 02:13 AM|
Bloody brilliant!!! ;)
|Posted by Wayne Tate on 07/08/09 at 09:15 AM|
Clever as always Allison :)
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/09/09 at 05:33 PM|
Nicely put Alison. I really like the ping pong anaology; applies nicely to the topic.
|Posted by Kris Mara on 07/10/09 at 04:39 PM|
a lovely tribute...excellent analogy here...