(You) Make Me
by Alison McKenzie
You make me
I feel your energy bounce
Over the net
Like a pong
And I, your ping
And together, we
Are the match.
(Game. Set. Match.)
Author's Note: For Vince, and the other poets that make me laugh...
Posted on 07/07/2009
Copyright © 2018 Alison McKenzie
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by V. Blake on 07/07/09 at 07:47 AM|
Hahaha I am honored to have inspired you!
|Posted by Laurie Blum on 07/07/09 at 01:02 PM|
Cute and fun! Great vibes think alike!! :D
|Posted by Shonda Creemer on 07/08/09 at 06:13 AM|
Bloody brilliant!!! ;)
|Posted by Wayne Tate on 07/08/09 at 01:15 PM|
Clever as always Allison :)
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/09/09 at 09:33 PM|
Nicely put Alison. I really like the ping pong anaology; applies nicely to the topic.
|Posted by Kris Mara on 07/10/09 at 08:39 PM|
a lovely tribute...excellent analogy here...