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by Kristi Paik

you would love me, to my death, if i, let, you -
I know- you know-ya know- we are,
completely, incompatible,
completely -
-i dont even know who you are -

does a puppy actually love ?
love is only for humans
which in turn allows for hatred

Moral of the story is:
everyone loses a love they believed would transform them.

07/05/2009

Author's Note: For my sister, who thinks she's the first girl with a broken heart.

Posted on 07/05/2009
Copyright © 2024 Kristi Paik

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Olivia Martin on 07/05/09 at 05:15 PM

Amazing tribute to the odes of the broken heart. Nice job, Kristi.

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