| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by V. Blake on 06/25/09 at 07:17 AM "Flutter by butterfly" is one of the strongest opening lines I've heard in awhile. Does well for the floaty nature of the rest of the poem. Yeah. Floaty. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 01/28/11 at 06:08 AM ... and I am such a caterpillar. Beautiful! |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 02/16/11 at 02:43 AM I adore every delicate line! Kudos poet, peace, jewels |
| Posted by Anne Boulender on 04/06/11 at 04:38 AM I'm always glad to see your poems as POTD. They have a nice quality to them. I agree with Vince's comment about Flutter by butterfly. |
| Posted by James Blaylock on 04/06/11 at 07:28 AM Extremely beautiful! I simply adore those magical creature. Such a wonderful poem! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/06/11 at 06:46 PM Really a nice, tight cohesive package you have here. The whole migration process amazes me for such delicate creatures. Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 04/06/11 at 07:30 PM I love nature and nature poems. This is wonderful and well crafted. I love the flow and especially the last few lines where the rhythym culminates with excellence. Thanks for sharing and I enjoyed reading this very much. |
