I collect sad songs like Mermaid's tears And walk with them Clinking mournfully in my pockets.
06/20/2009
Posted on 06/20/2009Copyright © 2024 Jon-Jacob F Deal
like the clinking of sad seashells, all broken? ahh, I liked the imagery used in this very much and it provoked the thought above. This was a very pleasant read.
Much strenth in this piece's brevity. Would make a good opening poem to a novel.