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Caterpillar's Lament

by Rowan Luis

A hooded owlet
you shall never become.
I shut the window on your feet

05/26/2009

Author's Note: I really did and I'm really sorry

Posted on 05/26/2009
Copyright © 2021 Rowan Luis

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/26/09 at 09:23 PM

That's a very interesting, very striking image in that last line. I like it.

Posted by Michael Smith on 01/23/10 at 05:24 AM

Congrats on POTD, Rowan! Full of imagery indeed, and makes us all feel sorry for the wittle catapiwa too (so, evocative)!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/23/10 at 04:17 PM

eeek!

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