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What I want

by John Ilotan

I want you

To melt in my arms
To sigh
When I kiss you

I want to

Take
Your breath
Away

05/18/2009

Posted on 05/18/2009
Copyright © 2019 John Ilotan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kris Mara on 05/18/09 at 04:39 PM

simple and powerful words and statement -- refreshing to read....and it takes ones breath away...

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/18/09 at 04:44 PM

Lovely in its simplicity - I like the continuity of the meeting lips and the breath taken.

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