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Gathering in the Mist
by Keith D Allisonfilm upon granite
the fire flickers
ancient cave paintings
primitive the form
film posted upon the granite
light flickers on the walls
paintings
primitive the form
subway wall
Three hundred years
children of the land
the Warriors
primitive forms
primitive the forms
05/07/2009 Posted on 05/07/2009
Copyright © 2026 Keith D Allison
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/08/09 at 12:41 AM ancient knows no boundary * I see these flickers
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| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/08/09 at 12:48 AM todays most vivid experience: reading your poem |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 05/08/09 at 12:45 PM Very nice write. I have always loved the early cave paintings. And you bring them "up to date" very well. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/08/09 at 03:12 PM I like the play with "primitive forms", the cave paintings then and now. You give the sense of certain constants. Thank you. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 05/14/09 at 12:22 PM Such economy of words in expressing a keen observation. Excellent. |
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