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The rhythm method

by Laura Doom

In the hope that her poem would scan
laura pushed for an assonance ban
but the sound of her howls
as she shifted her vowels
sent the rhyming scheme straight down the pan.

04/30/2009

Posted on 04/30/2009
Copyright © 2025 Laura Doom

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/30/09 at 09:27 PM

...love it laura, sorta like how "we" have to do the 5-7-5 haiku...with english, ain't easy to do, eh?

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/01/09 at 12:50 AM

hehehehehehe - thanks for this.

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 05/01/09 at 06:24 AM

HAHAHAHA!! Super duper Doom!

Posted by Stephan Anstey on 05/01/09 at 06:47 PM

doom, doom i tell ya

Posted by Kris Mara on 05/01/09 at 07:32 PM

ha, this is awesome

Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 05/03/09 at 06:04 PM

:-) Love it!

Posted by Richard Vince on 07/12/24 at 05:07 PM

Perfectly imperfect. :)

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