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The rhythm method
by Laura DoomIn the hope that her poem would scan
laura pushed for an assonance ban
but the sound of her howls
as she shifted her vowels
sent the rhyming scheme straight down the pan. 04/30/2009 Posted on 04/30/2009
Copyright © 2026 Laura Doom
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/30/09 at 09:27 PM ...love it laura, sorta like how "we" have to do the 5-7-5 haiku...with english, ain't easy to do, eh? |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/01/09 at 12:50 AM hehehehehehe - thanks for this. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 05/01/09 at 06:24 AM HAHAHAHA!! Super duper Doom! |
| Posted by Stephan Anstey on 05/01/09 at 06:47 PM doom, doom i tell ya
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| Posted by Kris Mara on 05/01/09 at 07:32 PM ha, this is awesome |
| Posted by Richard Vince on 07/12/24 at 05:07 PM Perfectly imperfect. :) |
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