04/24/2009
Posted on 04/25/2009Copyright © 2024 A. Paige White
Reading this made me laugh (when I should have been sad). Sorry, but you've given this a "slipping on a banana peel" kind of twist!
I hope there's an afterlife. And it's interesting without pig flus needed :)
The serious message of that first stanza belies the cool funny of the second. The poem crackles with contrast.