|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/17/09 at 04:30 PM|
A very uplifting piece! I wish I were as optimistic as you. Enjoyable poem with very vivid images- reat write as always!
|Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/17/09 at 06:25 PM|
I'd say that's pretty reasonable. Good piece from the archives, man.
|Posted by Tony Young on 04/17/09 at 08:58 PM|
Is this possible Chris, it sounds great...
|Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/19/09 at 08:41 PM|
Terrific Chris....sometimes we just need to let the "fiction" of life and death go, remain in the center...and forget we are there. Bon Voyage! Thanks.
|Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 04/20/09 at 01:52 AM|
You've still got some good ones in the vaults. This brought me a smile - what a great way to get around.... d:-)
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/20/09 at 05:25 PM|
Powerful imagery! Best have a chute open well before landing! Adventure for the young or young at heart (with a very good heart)!!
|Posted by Kris Mara on 04/20/09 at 06:27 PM|
fun read...but I think I'll stay on the ground if you don't mind! :)
|Posted by Maude Curtis on 05/31/09 at 02:43 PM|
You sound like you might be an ex paratrooper. This sounds vaguely familiar to stories my sweetie tells of his days with the 82nd airborne.
|Posted by Lori Blair on 12/07/11 at 11:42 PM|
and now I am flying mid air ever so content...thank you! Most excellent
|Posted by Gail Wolper on 03/03/14 at 03:48 AM|
Everyone needs a great fantasy of simple success! Well done!