| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/17/09 at 04:30 PM A very uplifting piece! I wish I were as optimistic as you. Enjoyable poem with very vivid images- reat write as always! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/17/09 at 06:25 PM I'd say that's pretty reasonable. Good piece from the archives, man. |
| Posted by Tony Young on 04/17/09 at 08:58 PM Is this possible Chris, it sounds great... |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/19/09 at 08:41 PM Terrific Chris....sometimes we just need to let the "fiction" of life and death go, remain in the center...and forget we are there. Bon Voyage! Thanks. |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 04/20/09 at 01:52 AM You've still got some good ones in the vaults. This brought me a smile - what a great way to get around.... d:-) |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/20/09 at 05:25 PM Powerful imagery! Best have a chute open well before landing! Adventure for the young or young at heart (with a very good heart)!! |
| Posted by Kris Mara on 04/20/09 at 06:27 PM fun read...but I think I'll stay on the ground if you don't mind! :) |
| Posted by Maude Curtis on 05/31/09 at 02:43 PM You sound like you might be an ex paratrooper. This sounds vaguely familiar to stories my sweetie tells of his days with the 82nd airborne. |
| Posted by Lori Blair on 12/07/11 at 11:42 PM and now I am flying mid air ever so content...thank you! Most excellent |
| Posted by Gail Wolper on 03/03/14 at 03:48 AM Everyone needs a great fantasy of simple success! Well done! |
