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time says no
by Mary Frances Spencerwhining excuses
procrastination unacceptable
not enough to go
around
too much to do
swamped slammed
all anxieties rising
oceans swell
and sweep
us shifting grains
sands
constantly pull
magnetic
dare us to stick
to
yes
04/12/2009 Author's Note: Anyone else get caught up in the busy-ness of life? MFS
Posted on 04/13/2009
Copyright © 2024 Mary Frances Spencer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 04/13/09 at 07:17 AM I love you, MFS!!! You have such a way with capturing a vibe. And, yes, getting caught up in the busy-ness is something I relate to these days. B R E A T H E...:-) many hugs to you!! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/13/09 at 01:16 PM Well said. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 04/13/09 at 01:41 PM Oh yes, the wedding month approaches and bills are coming due and Spring still shakes out its winter rug. Then of course words cry to be let go. Nice write lady. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/13/09 at 03:43 PM "dare us to stick to yes" - indeed! I like the use of oceans and sands and that magnetic pull. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/14/09 at 07:14 PM Maybe I'm too busy procrastinating to get caught up....sorry, I'll have to get back to you on that...ha...((great write)). |
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