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Ode to My Truck II

by James Zealy

Old and battered
Wrecked and reborn
Therapy for another

Even when disabled
Now two years hence
My truck refused to aquiesce

It cranked though it was declared junk,
Rolled despite a crushed fender
And radiator.

It rested for two years
In a friends garage awaiting
A new purpose

Spawned by jobs collapsing
Like its crumpled fender

His keeper confused and angry
Found life and desire
With every fender pull
Every hood pound bend and jump
Every shade tree mechanic trick
Until it started and rolled anew

My truck's saviour walks a little straighter
A sense of accomplishment imprinted
With each step

As I touched the rough and bumpy fender
I felt a rush of loss made whole
And smiled

04/10/2009

Posted on 04/10/2009
Copyright © 2024 James Zealy

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Maude Curtis on 04/10/09 at 08:15 PM

Good for you resurrecting the old again. I pat you on the back. PS I hope your truck is a classic, it may be worth some money.

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 04/10/09 at 10:26 PM

When I first read the first few lines, I thought, "oh my, this describes me!" lol If only doctors were this good. I loved this! ~Clara Mae

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/11/09 at 12:55 AM

I enjoyed the rebirth aspect to this. A satisfying ending.

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