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poets invading

by Mary Frances Spencer


we infiltrated another
elementary school
weapons
locked loaded
shooting ideas
bombs overhead
pencils in hand

the enemy
blank lined sheets
white paper
crying out for mercy
as the young

students scribbled
unleashed
their
poetic volley

word by word

we left

creative wreckage
and maybe some bits
of inspiration
floating in the dust

04/02/2009

Author's Note: I visited a local elementary school today with a group of poets and we each worked with a class! What an interesting challenge and experience. MFS

Posted on 04/03/2009
Copyright © 2024 Mary Frances Spencer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 04/03/09 at 09:54 AM

This is adorable!

Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 04/03/09 at 11:33 AM

Very creative and quite a bit of fun to read. Great work.

Posted by George Hoerner on 04/03/09 at 12:30 PM

What a great way to inhance this month and a nice write to back it up.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/03/09 at 02:27 PM

I like how this puts a refreshingly light spin on such a dark topic. Well done!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/03/09 at 02:28 PM

PS: If only all those shattered minds would turn to poetry instead of guns as we do.

Posted by Alisa Js on 04/05/09 at 07:42 AM

Bravo! keep up the good work, you! alisa

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