Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 03/23/09 at 06:57 PM I like to take the train and the feel of time passing through towns and fields as you capture here. Your last stanza, great. smh |
Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 03/23/09 at 07:05 PM makes me wish i could take a good long train ride across the country. but i'll settle for the short city train we have for now. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/25/09 at 01:28 AM I enjoy this journey and your observations, its snap shots that a part of the whole, and the train as vehicle. Thank you. |
Posted by Tom Goss on 03/26/09 at 05:44 PM Fantastic flow and images, a truly enjoyable ride. |
Posted by Vere Mantratriad on 03/27/09 at 03:03 PM This is so beautifully expressed. Your use of language quite effectively takes the reader on the journey with you. |