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beautiful.
by Melissa Arel
those labyrinthine limbs and legs
of lovers locked in a luscious liason,
lace and loop hearts and hands
amidst a hot, honeyed high
of heavenly heat and hunger.
drink deeply dear ones
divulge and devour that devotion -
the desire and delight of dreams is
beautiful.
03/17/2009 Author's Note: its been such a long time since i've written a poem; literally months. i'm unsure of the ending.. any thoughts?
Posted on 03/18/2009
Copyright © 2024 Melissa Arel
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 03/18/09 at 12:39 PM well, this just fried my bacon to a sizzle and I didn't even have to turn on the stove...and no, no more need be added. This poem is steamy as it is! |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 03/20/09 at 04:20 AM I think the ending is perfect... It feels like a sigh between the build up and the climax. Well done! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/23/09 at 01:06 AM Romantic love fulfilled and indeed is beautiful in its rightful place. Very expressive without being erotic! |
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