exploding vs. imploding
by Nanette Bellman
i'd rather sacrifice myself
for the greater good of mankind
than to be selfish
and keep it all to myself
Author's Note: 1:27 AM
Posted on 03/12/2009
Copyright © 2018 Nanette Bellman
|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/12/09 at 07:45 PM|
At 1:27 AM, I was trying to fall asleep- you made better use of that time than I did! short and right to the point! loved it! good write.
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/13/09 at 12:07 AM|
I will match your sacrifice and raise you.
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/13/09 at 12:08 AM|
|Posted by Anita Mac on 03/13/09 at 04:29 AM|
I think I feel the same, but I could never come up with this twist on it. Well said.
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/14/15 at 06:28 PM|
Evocative poem, Nanette. Congrats on POTD. Well deserved!
|Posted by Mo Couts on 03/14/15 at 10:16 PM|
What a woman you are; congrats on POTD girlie!