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go ahead

by Cole Miller

face forward
dont look back
just go
go ahead
do what youre
supposed to
dont ask
just go
go ahead
keep moving
face down
dont let them
see you
just go
go ahead


Author's Note: everything looks better in scrawled handwritten pen. i havent written anything worth posting in years.

Posted on 03/02/2009
Copyright © 2020 Cole Miller

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/02/09 at 02:42 PM

Well, I liked this, for what that's worth.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/15/13 at 12:36 PM

sometimes we are not the best judges of our work. I think this is the case here, given this poem is infinitely worthy of posting, always has been. always will be, not because I say so, but because the poem does in so many words which we can all identify with, given it concerns itself with a theme which is human and what better shape and form for a poem, than it take that of human?

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