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by Maria Massarella



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Goner

Once in a conversation
you asked what is this magnetism
that draws me to you

Sometimes the answer finds me
then disappears like a breath absorbed
exhaled

Part of it remains within forever

 You are that breath

 

*m.a

 

02/28/2009

Author's Note: sometimes the sun is like a morning star ...
or simply the digital camera has a special eye

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Posted on 02/28/2009
Copyright © 2024 Maria Massarella

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/28/09 at 03:49 AM

I love the idea of someone being a "breath". Beautiful presentation. Thank you.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/28/09 at 04:19 PM

Such a beautiful write with a stunning background. I love your work. Alot of work goes into it and it shows!

Posted by Scott Utley on 03/01/09 at 01:18 AM

You know the poet is a priestess when simply the title of a poem sends shutters throughout your body, shutters ... that only moments later evaporate with the wind.

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 03/05/09 at 05:07 AM

If this were a card I would buy it and place it on the wall above my desk, for it is beauty and poetry and these things make me happy...how do you do this...smh

Posted by A. Paige White on 03/05/09 at 05:22 PM

Your poetry gives deep sighs in the spirit of me. I love it so much, I think I'll print it and put it right over my desk. Every time I look at it, I'll breath a prayer of Thanks for the God of Poetry and pictures of His grace given so wonderfully to us.

Posted by Wendy Sparling on 03/05/09 at 08:32 PM

Your poetry leaves me breathless. Thank you for the smile you put on my face.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/06/09 at 12:52 AM

Your poetry hss a magnetism that draws me to it...CharMin

Posted by Laurie Blum on 03/06/09 at 03:20 AM

Bellissima!!

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/06/09 at 04:27 AM

You speak in Spirit Realm. A language that reaches through barriers and wonder. We love listening to you.

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