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Renate, a Love Story

by Wendy Sparling

A sound of a flute playing solo
echoes across mountain slopes,
caressing islands and beaches,
as the boat drifts with the tide

I froze an ice wreath made
of rose petals and boxwood,
to celebrate your life.
A floral halo to float upon
your Pacific Ocean grave

A toast, gin and tonic
pass among our friends,
they watch your circle of life
melt into ocean's salty bay,
leaving your grey ashes
to dance upon rippling water

Today, I will begin my journey,
to deprive myself of food,
for it is my final wish and destiny
to long last be with you

Renate, I hear your flute
Soon sweetheart, soon..

01/24/2004

Author's Note: Written with love, for my friends, Renete and Hans.

Posted on 02/23/2009
Copyright © 2025 Wendy Sparling

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/23/09 at 03:31 PM

A beautiful painting of sight and sound put to words!

Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 02/25/09 at 06:07 PM

This really touched me. Beautiful.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/26/09 at 11:05 PM

I am glad you are writing again....CharMin

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