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My Mind's Not "Squeaky Clean"

by Fredrich Mohre

Ms. Curtis composed a very zesty poem a few days back. "Squeaky Clean" about a young lady's shower detachment.......I thought I'd give it an answer, just for the fun of it.......Wild and great work Emmi, keep it up .....Oh yes, it's Ok to print this because she "Sudz so"........

Having read a little ditty,
that really made me very giddy,
'bout a lady who relieves her tension
with a special shower wand extension.
T'was both erotic and quite witty
changed her shower into 'Fun City"
How I fantasized this bathing beauty
soaping down from head to booty.
My envy's drove by hedonism
of her super hand-held mechanism,
All on which she can explore
the buttons and controls galore.
Controls from softest to extreme,
to hit high C, or even scream.
In my mind's eye, I can see
her hit all the spots, from "A" to "G"

I'm getting older, long in tooth,
body crumbling, mind uncouth.
I've known the reaper, and sure that he
could shortly take a trip with me.
Although you feel that I'm obsessed
I'd like to make one last request......
To the Power that oversees
reincarnate me if you please.
Let me come back from the dead,
as this Lady's "Razzle-Dazzle" shower head.......

02/21/2009

Posted on 02/21/2009
Copyright © 2026 Fredrich Mohre

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/21/09 at 10:33 PM

Heh. Obviously, this is great.

Posted by Maude Curtis on 02/21/09 at 11:57 PM

Oh you Devil you. It seems that our minds run in the same gutter. You definetly can make me "Moen"

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