| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Shonda Creemer on 02/18/09 at 03:04 AM Words spoken from what seems within my own soul. You made me cry. |
| Posted by Shonda Creemer on 02/18/09 at 03:05 AM Oh ~ adding to my favs btw! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/18/09 at 03:11 AM Obviously, you know those first couple of lines are awesome. This is good stuff all around though. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/19/09 at 03:25 PM I like the play on words here (cotton/batting), though not sure how it applies to depression, having suffered from depression myself from time to time. Everyone is different though, and I do epathize with the honest emotion of this piece. |
| Posted by Kerowyn Rose on 02/23/09 at 12:44 AM You took my breath away with this one... very well put. I can't stop reading it over and over. Thanks for sharing! |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/11/09 at 02:32 PM This piece is one of your best- it really conveys the message that you are trying to get across- depression (I can relate- I stare into space ALOT!) Wonderful write! |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 01/19/11 at 10:19 PM this is my world right about now - minus the cotton - add a computer screen at a sterile law firm - yup - my world. |
