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Love/Hate
by Joan SerratelliTwo emotions
So close
On a 360 degree angle
They lay side by side
on the circle of life
The real hatred is indifference
when caring dosen't exist
My only question is
when love dies
where does it go?
does it float around forever
just waiting to be found?
02/13/2009 Author's Note: A work in progress. My theory~ always has been; always will be. Feel free to comment,
Posted on 02/13/2009
Copyright © 2026 Joan Serratelli
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| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/15/09 at 03:23 PM Thought provoking, and a valuable question asked in that second stanza. For me, having been around the block a few times in my 51 years, I like to think that some semblance of those loves remains, focusing on the positives as opposed to the negatives. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/16/09 at 06:25 PM "The real hatred is indifference."
Indifference is horrible to bear.
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| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/16/09 at 06:48 PM Flying into my Favorites folder. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 02/18/09 at 04:04 AM I would love to read your further exploration of this concept. I love where you've taken it so far, but more, maybe, and then revision? |
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