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february second

by Ava Blu


i am your first love,
and i tell you of the statistic that 2 out 5 people marry
their first love;

we giggle about this like 8 year olds on the playground at recess
and i've never been so happy with being silly before.

02/02/2009

Author's Note: not everything needs fancy words and ideas

Posted on 02/02/2009
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Jason Wardell on 02/02/09 at 10:42 PM

Sometimes the simple ideas are the ones most worthy of capturing.

Posted by Nanette Bellman on 02/02/09 at 11:49 PM

i long for silliness. it's really great. oh, and the warm fuzzies.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/03/09 at 04:05 PM

The image of 8 year olds giggling gives this life and a wonderful sense of innocence, something for which most of us adults long, and then, love.

Posted by Carolyn Coville on 02/17/09 at 03:44 AM

no fancy words needed here! what a sweet image to the mind and a smile to the face this brings, ava.

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