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What's in a Name?

by Jared Orlando

Grace, she's falling fast
Faith is becoming impatient.
While Melody is lacking creativity,
Destiny is struggling to prioritize.
Charity is becoming a little too greedy
And Jasmine is overlooked;
Prudence is juggling ethics
And Ruby is loosing her shine.
Serenity is just too agitated, and it seems
Belle is shedding self-esteem.
We are named to secure our futures
But we can never seem to get it right.

02/02/2009

Posted on 02/02/2009
Copyright © 2024 Jared Orlando

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/02/09 at 05:22 AM

Sounds like quite a collection. Nicely done.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/03/09 at 04:02 PM

I like this study in names - clever, but also a comment on how we think of ourselves and the power of words assigned. The last two lines are very thought provoking.

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