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Building

by Joe Cramer

Cumulus clouds building

Throughout the long afternoon,

Ending such a day.

02/01/2009

Posted on 02/02/2009
Copyright © 2025 Joe Cramer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by A. Paige White on 02/02/09 at 03:53 AM

Very pretty description. Here, I think the cumulus is accomodating the skies with weeping; the superbowl is over.

Posted by Colleen Sperry on 02/03/09 at 01:10 AM

it was a beautiful day!

Posted by Colleen Sperry on 02/03/09 at 01:11 AM

it was a beautiful day!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/03/09 at 03:38 AM

The placement of the word "such" makes this for me.

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