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february first

by Ava Blu



you

[my wandering lover
my last attempt at salvation
my escape through the maze]

are inspiring dragonflies to flutter with each blink.

02/01/2009

Posted on 02/01/2009
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/02/09 at 12:06 AM

Obviously, that's a perfect last line.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/02/09 at 04:57 AM

Wow!

Posted by Shonda Creemer on 02/02/09 at 10:17 PM

feb has always been a good month :)

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 02/04/09 at 03:39 PM

I love the illiteration in this and I agree, the last line is perfect. smh.

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