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Painless Death

by Anastasia Shows

Waking to the white dove's call,
i feel morning's chill.
you wake not; just lie so still.

01/26/2009

Posted on 01/26/2009
Copyright © 2024 Anastasia Shows

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charles M Harrison on 04/10/10 at 09:30 PM

Sad, but very nicely done.

Posted by Ava Blu on 04/14/10 at 12:55 AM

I see you have this listed as a haiku, but your syllables are 7-5-7 rather than the correct 5-7-5.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/18/10 at 09:42 PM

...wow, a punch of arsenic and old lace and Emily [machine won't let her last name be typed] she wrote in several line thingees[not any of the kus, or senyrus...but this is delightful. deep, sweet, sad, a wierd feel-good awe to it. i'm chilled after reading it.

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