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winter coat

by Kristina Woodhill

winter coats
are on sale
thigh length
leather

stirring
redolence
to nose

sleek with
a slight flare
long sleeves
some in red,
black basic

an urge of
brown animal
allowing
masquerade

to fit
into

stretch
fingers

toward
tonight

and
howl

(swish)

01/25/2009

Posted on 01/25/2009
Copyright © 2026 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/25/09 at 11:53 PM

A nice image of the cold and what we do to get through it. Heh. Beautifully done.

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 01/26/09 at 05:45 PM

and howl (swish) lol Brilliant.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/23/09 at 04:35 PM

...k-gal, this is cool [no pun intended] i sorta helped you dress, you need some greenery, maybe a splash o' white...love the image of "an URGE of brown" man that one line is a keeper, i love the whole thing...

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