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today
by Jared Fladelandi realized today
that i feel most awake
when i ponder what death could be like.
that the ultimate act of faith
is leaping off a cliff knowing you'll survive
that deep inside me
lies the answer. 01/09/2009 Posted on 01/10/2009
Copyright © 2026 Jared Fladeland
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/10/09 at 05:14 AM Indeed. Especially in that second stanza. I really enjoyed this. |
| Posted by Nanette Bellman on 01/10/09 at 05:29 PM this is nostalgia at it's finest jared. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 01/11/09 at 06:33 AM Great insights. Amen. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 01/11/09 at 08:43 PM Intriguing concept of faith! Presented with a bit of ambiguity! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/14/09 at 04:47 PM Love the first two stanzas and I think they could stand without the third, as they seem like the answer to me. |
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