| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 01/07/09 at 03:44 AM Absolutely awesome image in that last stanza. Terrific stuff, man. |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 01/07/09 at 05:15 AM Aloha George... reading through this one and pondering the message within, I walk away with a thought. And that thought is of a need to remain focused in whatever direction one believes their fate or destiny is taking them. Otherwise, one will merely achieve the shot gun effect... with as man scattered results. alisa ;-) |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 01/07/09 at 05:16 AM p.s. typo alert.. I meant to say..'with as many scattered results' |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/21/13 at 10:19 PM George, you could give all the great philosophers and existentialists a run for their money. your poetry is always on the cusp of the curious, which would envy any make of cat, the sort of curiosity which does not kill but aspires to more abundant life. |
